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TranslationSengoku Youko 92

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Title: Chapter 92 One Together with Many

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Shi: So that's the shape it takes huh.
Shi: The part of you that thinks, "You're a monster."
S: I'm a... monster...

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Shi: Senya
Shi: Today you're to get an answer out of the spiritual world.
S: An answer...? To what...?
Shi: What you want to be.
S: What I... want to be...
Shi: I bet it's not that at least.

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Shi: So face that thing head on.
Title: Chapter 92 One Together with Many

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S: !!
S: Guh...!!
SM: A... Agh... A...
SM: I am Senya...
SM: I killed a lot...
S: !!
SM: You are Senya
SM: You are covered in blood

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SM: We are monsters. Let's run. Run away.
SM: That one is coming. {V(T): It's coming (he's treating 幸せ as if it were a person, not that there is a happy person coming)}
SM: Coming to burns us to death. {V: burns -> burn}
S: ...That one...!?
SM: Run!! Run!! RUN!! RUN!! RUUN!!
SM: From Tsukiko!! From Nau!! From Shinsuke!! From the village!!
SM: From that one!! The "happy" one is coming for us!! {V(T): It's right there! Happiness is coming for us!!}
S: !!
SM: Coming to burn us to death in that blinding white light!!

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S: YOU!!
S: YOU!! 
S: OOO!!
Shi: ...
S: YOU'RE GOING DOWN!!

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S: I'll take you down!!
S: I'll overcome you!!
S: As I'm going to let this damn monster
S: Swallow me up!!

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S: SHIITT!! {V: I'd just keep this as "shit" without extending it since that's what the original is}
S: Did I really get threatened by something like this!? {V: This is what I felt so threatened by!?}
S: This scared me so much!? {V: This -> This is what (trying to keep this and above line using similar phrasing)}
S: Was I really going to run away from everyone!? Me!?
S: You damn...!! I am strong!!
S: You just!! You're just...!!

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Shi: ...
Shi: Wha?
Shi: ...what the heck was he even doing...
Shi<SmallText>: He got swallowed

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S: It's the "happy" light!!
S: It's come to burn me to death!!
S: That's why I said to run away!!
S: It's because you didn't run away sooner that we got burnt!!
S: I'll take you down and run away on my own!!

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Shi: Oh dear...
Shi: He got mixed up and split himself in two. He can't even tell himself apart.
S: UGAAAGHHH!!
Shi: ...Still, to think he had this much fighting spirit in him...
Shi: Yeah. He turned his eyes away from that fighting spirit spirit and pent it all up inside. Thanks to that it's gone and exploded away... {V: Yeah -> Oh, I see. ; Thanks to that -> and now it's (combine with previous sentence into one instead of two)}
Shi: Pheeeww
Shi: Heeey. Senya.
S: What!?
S: What!?
Shi: Let's leave it at that.
Shi: Just look at yourself. Is that what you really want to be?
S: Ah. It's Shinsuke.
S: Ah. It's Shinsuke.
Shi: Hm?
S: It's dangerous! Run!!
Shi: Huh? hey!!
S: The "happy" one is coming!! {V(T): Happiness is coming [for us]!}

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Shi: Wai... Oh. So that's it.
Shi: I'm part of what that guy's "happiness" is made up of! {V: that guy's -> his ("that guy" sounds too distant)}
Shi: I'm glad he looks up to me like an older brother but...
Shi: Actually, I told him not to fight here in the spiritual world but he goes and gets himself swallowed up just like that... {V: Actually -> And sheesh ("actually" would imply he's going more in depth on something from before)}
Shi: Hm?
Shi: Uwhoah!?

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Shi: Wha...
S: Ghhah
Shi: Tsu...
Shi: Tsukiko?
Shi: nau?
H: Hey. We came to see this Yamato Takeru but...
H: Is that over with already?
Shi: Hanatora!! That's done already. Just what are they...
H: Hm? They said they wanted to come or something
H: So I brought them here.

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T: Senya
N: Senya
S: Hii
S: It's coming!!
S: It's coming!!
S: Gyaaaah
S: Hot Hot Hot
S: Burning Burning Burning
S: Arrgghh!!
S: Leggo!! Leggo!! {V: Leggo -> Let go (離せ is normal Japanese, I'd reserve Leggo if it was more like ハナセ or 離セ)}

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T: No.
T: I'm not letting you go.
S: Stop it!! I can't be happy!!
S: I'm the one   who killed...
T: Daddy died
T: But it wasn't your fault
{V (both above): It's not your fault that daddy died (I'm on the fence about which of these is better, thoughts?)}

S: I
S: I killed him
S: I...
S: ...killed him...
S: ...
T: ...fine. We'll leave it at that.
T: But, if that eats you up so much inside

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T: Then take responsibility for it.
S: Respon!?
S: sibility!?
T: Senya
T: Daddy couldn't be there for me, so make me happy enough to make up for it. {V: Make me happy enough to make up for [the happiness/all the things] Daddy wasn't able to [give/do with] me. (I feel like this line could still be improved, but I'm drawing a big fat blank right now)}
S: ...

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T: ...if it's you.
T: I know I'll be happy. It's you that I want Senya.
{V (above two): ...I know that you can make me happy. ;  you that I -> you who I}

T: ...
T: SeSenya!! You're making a girl say this much to you!! {V: SeSenya -> S-Senya}
T: Don't you have anything to say back!?

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S: I   I love you   I
S: I Tsukiko you love!!
T: Tsu {V: Tsu -> It's (this is her stuttering the first part of the next bubble)}
T: It's "Tsukiko I love you" isn't it!! You idiot!! {V: I'd drop the "isn't it", she's not really asking a question here. Maybe replace it with something like "Get it right! It's <etc>"}
S: So-Sorr... I messed up!!

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Shi: Nau.
Shi: Go.
N: ...... ......
N: Got it
Shi: So that's what Senya wants to be, huh?
H: Hmm...

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H: "One Together With Many"

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T: Ah...
T: Daddy...
N: Oh. The old tigerman and...
N: Teru's there too nau.
S: Furuon... Father...
S: And... the person he's with is... is she...

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S: Mother...?
Demons: Senya
Demons: We are friends
Demons: Even if your transformation advances
Demons: That doesn't mean that you'll lose your mind
Demons: You know what love is
Demons: There is love here inside of you
{V(T): The からだ from these bubbles are reasons for why he won't lose his mind.}

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Demons: So what you're going to transform into  was already decided long ago. {V(T): Drop the "So", see previous comment}
Demons: We will save everything with our thousand arms.
Demons: Let's go
Demons: Let's save the Thousand Tailed Demon Fox

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Box: 4 days later
Box: We arrived at the Thousand Tailed Demon Fox's barriered island. {V: I don't have the files on hand right now, but I feel like I TL'd 結界島 somewhere before.}
 

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